I already wrote the story I just don’t any idea what to put in the conclusion. Should I start by a question or maybe what I learned from that story? I would really appreciate your help :))

Hi Imane! I’m happy to help :). What specifically are you having trouble with? – Amanda

Felisha

Try writing about how chocolate makes you feel good and and leave the reader curious but satisfied with what they read , talk about your reasons and give an example of how chocolate is beneficial to people , like , can it cure diseases? And end on something positive like , there’s much more to chocolate than just a sweet treat.

HOPE THIS HELPED , GOOD LUCK!!!!

Hi Heaven!

If writing made you more liberated and joyful as well as a better writer, it would be good to conclude your essay with some reflection on those points! A conclusion should summarize what you’ve written your paper about, so a short summary of your paper is always good material for a conclusion. 🙂 You could also include some thoughts about how you’re going to apply what you’ve learned or from writing in the future or what lessons you’ve learned from the experience! I hope these suggestions are helpful!

Hi Thuy,

It sounds like you might be getting hung up on the “recommend a better solution” idea, which isn’t a requirement — it’s just one way to end an essay. Instead, you might end by noting the sense of satisfaction one feels when knowing that they paid for their education (perhaps tying this to your own experience, if you are currently paying tuition) or another benefit of tuition — this is a good opportunity to mention something beneficial that perhaps wasn’t “meaty” enough to be one of the main points of your argument.

Best,
Erin

I think you could end the essay by discussing the larger significance of their relationship within the play and (if you want to go the hypothetical route) mention how the play would be different had their relationship been different. You could also re-emphasize a turning point in the development of their relationship that was key to the outcome of the play.