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Do you think first responders rushing to the scene of a tragedy to help victims? Maybe you’re reading this before lunch, and the first thing you think of is a hero sandwich.

While both of these are legitimate types of heroes, they aren’t today’s focus. This article focuses on tragic heroes.

Specifically, we’re going to look at the difference between your average, run-of-the-mill hero and a tragic hero. And because you’re probably here because you need to write an essay about a tragic hero, we’re going to cover that too.

Without further ado, here’s (almost) everything you need to know about tragic heroes.

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What Is a Tragic Hero?

Of course, in order to be a tragic hero, one must first be a hero.

A hero is generally a courageous warrior type who is admired by many and who is ready to rush into harm’s way to save individuals (or the entire planet).

So what makes a tragic hero tragic?

The one-sentence definition: Tragic heroes are literary characters (often the protagonist) who make a crucial judgment error that ultimately leads to their downfall.

Of course, there’s more to a tragic hero than a hero who makes a mistake.

Tragic heroes generally possess the following characteristics:

  • Tragic heroes are imperfect. The audience sees the character as flawed, and they can relate to and empathize with the hero.
  • Tragic heroes are prideful and often suffer more than necessary.
  • Tragic heroes are generally someone of high status who experiences a drastic change in fortune (from good to bad).
  • The downfall of a tragic hero is evident from the start, but the hero can do nothing to stop it.
  • Tragic heroes discover their impending fate and accept it.
  • Tragic heroes are harmed (emotionally and/or physically) throughout their lives.
  • While tragic heroes learn from their mistakes, they are powerless to control their ultimate fate.
  • Tragic heroes must face an important decision. It is often an error in judgment regarding the decision that causes their downfall.

NOTE: While the classic tragic hero was a male from a wealthy and/or powerful family, modern tragic heroes may be any gender and from any background.

How to Write About a Tragic Hero

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Writing about a tragic hero is like writing about any other topic in the sense that there are a ton of ways to approach the subject. But unless your assignment specifically states that your essay should list and/or describe a handful of tragic heroes in literature, your essay should do more than merely list examples.

You need to find a focus, and you need to analyze.

Before you do anything, though, you need to decide who you want to write about.

Choose your hero

One of the first steps in writing about a tragic hero is to consider which hero (or heroes) you’ll focus on. This may already be dictated by your assignment, but if you have a choice, consider which heroes speak to you.

Do you want to write about classic Shakespearean tragic heroes like Hamlet or Romeo (from Romeo and Juliet), or will you focus on a more modern tragic hero like Severus Snape from Harry Potter?

If you’re still not sure which hero to select, check out 6 Tragic Hero Examples for a Heroic Essay for inspiration.

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Decide your approach

Once you’ve selected your hero(es), decide what type of essay you’ll write.

Not sure how to approach your essay? Here are three ideas.

Character analysis essay

You may choose to develop a character analysis within another type of essay, or you may want to write an entire essay that analyzes your hero’s character.

In this case, the focus of the literary analysis is often to explain how and why your hero fits the definition of a tragic hero.

For instance, let’s say you’re writing about Batman.

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Batman fits the classic definition of a tragic hero for the reasons below:

  • He’s an educated, intelligent man who comes from a wealthy, powerful family.
  • He suffers because his parents were tragically murdered.
  • His life becomes more difficult after the death of his parents as he chooses to avenge their deaths and fight crime.
  • He is a (relatively) normal person who the audience can relate to and empathize with.
  • He possesses a character flaw in that he vows not to kill others. While some may, of course, not see this as an actual flaw, it is what causes Batman to experience more hardships as he does not kill villains when given the chance (which leads to even more crime, hardship, and destruction).

Once you’ve hit the key points to highlight how and why the character fits the definition of a tragic hero, use specific examples from the story to fill in the details and support your claims.

Check out how one student handled a character analysis in Macbeth: A Nihilistic, Self-Loathing Tragic Hero.

Alternatively, your character analysis might conclude that a character is not a tragic hero. To see an example of this strategy in action, read Why Okonkwo in Things Fall Apart Is Not a Tragic Hero.

Compare and contrast essay

If you’re comparing and contrasting two (or more) tragic heroes, don’t simply write a list of similarities and differences. While creating this type of list is a great prewriting strategy, your compare and contrast essay needs to do more than simply identify character traits.

The essay needs a focus. Think about the point you’re trying to make by comparing and contrasting the tragic heroes.

Here’s what I mean.

Imagine you’re writing a compare and contrast essay about the tragic heroes of Shakespeare.

Your paper wouldn’t simply list tragic heroes and identify character traits that are the same or different.

Instead, you would need to develop a clear thesis to let your readers know what exactly you’ll be discussing about Shakespeare’s tragic heroes.

For example, when developing your thesis, you might consider the following questions:

  • Does Shakespeare use the same types of tragic heroes in a number of plays? Do Romeo, Hamlet, and Macbeth share more than the basic elements that define a traditional tragic hero?
  • Or does Shakespeare mix it up and develop unique characters that portray a tragic hero differently in each play?

Another approach is to compare and contrast two tragic heroes who, on the surface, don’t seem to have much in common but who are ultimately more alike than many would imagine.

Take, for example, Macbeth and Willy Loman (from Death of a Salesman). On the surface, Loman, a salesman trying to provide for his family, and Macbeth, a general who wants nothing more than to be king, seem to have little in common.

Both, however, share a common fatal flaw: ambition. Both men want more out of life and want to move beyond their current stations in life.

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Want more ideas of tragic heroes to compare? Check out these essay examples for inspiration:

Persuasive essay

The goal of a persuasive essay is to convince your audience. One common tragic hero essay assignment is to convince your reader that the real tragic hero in a work is someone aside from the obvious choice.

Here are a few examples

If your professor allows you to be a little more creative in your approach, you might try to convince your readers why you should be considered a tragic hero.

Remember, modern tragic heroes don’t need to be nobility or male, so consider how you might fit the definition of a tragic hero (aside from that whole part about your tragic flaw leading to your demise, of course).

Perhaps your character flaw is lack of self-control, pride, or ambition. Perhaps you’ve suffered in some way because of this flaw, and it has caused hardships in your life.

You might even include some elements of comparison and contrast to illustrate how you compare to a tragic hero on film or in classic literature.

Ready to Write?

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Now that you have a better understanding of tragic heroes and are ready to begin writing, take a look at these resources to help you get started:

Not sure your paper is the best it can be? Don’t let a poorly written essay be your tragic flaw. Let the editors at Kibin help you improve your writing.

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3 Hunger Games Characters and How to Write About Them https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/hunger-games-characters/ https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/hunger-games-characters/#respond Tue, 17 Sep 2019 00:00:56 +0000 https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/?p=8228 Read more "3 Hunger Games Characters and How to Write About Them"]]> You can have the most action-packed novel out there, but if the characters aren’t great, the story probably won’t feel complete.

When it comes to The Hunger Games, the characters feel in-depth and relatable—even in a place and time readers can’t necessarily relate to. But because the characters in The Hunger Games do have depth, your essay about them can’t just talk about the basics.

Fortunately, I’m here to help you explore three different characters—a major character, a minor character, and one that’s in between—and show you different ways you can write about them in your essay.

Analyzing Katniss Everdeen

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Katniss is the protagonist of The Hunger Games and the narrator. Because the novel is written in first-person, you get an in-depth look into Katniss’s mind (which gives you plenty of content for your essay).

Her love for family & friends

Katniss has a few main traits, including her talent with a bow and her reluctant attitude toward fame, but it’s her intense love for her family that drives many of her actions.

Her father died when she was younger, and her mother basically went comatose during that time. So it was up to Katniss to provide for her younger sister, Prim. Katniss’s love for her family, specifically for her sister, drove Katniss to volunteer as a tribute for the Hunger Games in the first place.

Katniss’s intense love also extends to her friends—Gale, Peeta, Cinna, and Rue. She sees these individuals for who they are—not their statuses or their districts.

Her hatred of the Capitol

Katniss’s other main defining trait throughout The Hunger Games is her distaste for fame and the Capitol in general.

She comes from District 12, where people die in the mines and get beaten by Peace Keepers—all while people in the Capitol live in the lap of luxury. The people in District 12 also don’t have to send their children to die in the Hunger Games, so they view it almost the same way we view the Super Bowl.

Katniss is reluctant to wear frilly dresses and play nice for the sponsors. Because of this, she has a hard time making friends and allies in the arena. But the ones she does make are true friends—they’re not just playing the game.

Tips for a Hunger Games essay about Katniss

Katniss may seem like one of the easiest Hunger Games characters to write about because you do get to see what’s going through her head. However, that also presents some challenges.

My advice (unless otherwise instructed by your teacher) is to focus on just one of these characteristics and really go in-depth about it. That will give your essay a clearer focus.

Interested in how other students have written about Katniss? Check out these example essays:

Analyzing Haymitch Abernathy

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Several other districts have a few mentors to choose from when new tributes need to prepare for the Hunger Games. But Haymitch is the only surviving victor in District 12. He’s also one of my favorite Hunger Games characters. He’s almost always drunk and rude, but there’s sadness and compassion behind his gruff facade.

Haymitch won one of the Hunger Games years ago, and his life since then has been a living hell. As Haymitch is the only living victor in the district, no one else can relate to the pain he had to endure. He’s lost loved ones because of the Games. Because of this, he tries not to get too close to Katniss and Peeta.

But Haymitch knows how to play the game. He knows what it takes to win—not just the lethal skills but also what to avoid, what traps to look out for, and what the audience likes to see in terms of emotions.

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How you can approach your essay about Haymitch

Haymitch’s full background isn’t laid out until later in the series, but there’s still plenty to write about if your essay is only covering the events in the first book. Here are a few ideas on what you could write about:

  1. The ways in which Haymitch helps Katniss survive.
  2. How Haymitch’s past has affected his personality.
  3. Haymitch’s character development over the course of the series (if you’re focusing on more than just the first book).

You could also consider writing an essay from the perspective of Haymitchor another character.

Analyzing Cato

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I know, I know. Cato isn’t exactly a main character. However, he’s both interesting and important. Plus, I figured if everyone else in your class is writing about Katniss and Peeta, you might find it fun to focus on one of the Hunger Games characters no one else will.

Cato is a career tribute from District 2. The districts closest to the Capitol have more wealth and view being a tribute as a great honor. Career tributes train for years, so their strength, speed, and skill are leagues above most of the other tributes.

Cato is no exception. He’s a beast of a man, strong enough (and vicious enough) to break someone’s neck with one swift motion. It’s no surprise that he’s one of the last ones standing.

It’s not until the fight before his death that we see the interesting side of Cato. Because he grew up training for the Hunger Games, he’s expected to be the best. That pressure from his family and his district made him a killer.

He was used to being the favorite, being the best. He felt right at home being favored among the sponsors. So when Katniss stole the show in the ceremony before the Games, she moved to the top of his kill list.

Cato was truly a pawn in the Games. His whole life was centered around being a tribute. But the people sponsoring and betting on the Games didn’t care. He was there for their entertainment. Even his death was drawn out simply to make for a more entertaining show.

How to write about Cato

As with writing about any character, it’s easiest to write about Cato if you pay special attention to him while you read.

Focus on his dialogue during the fight before his death—and with that in mind, read through the other scenes he’s in. This will give you much more insight into why he does what he does and why he’s so focused on winning.

It’s not about survival to him—it’s about making his district proud.

(Need to write about themes in The Hunger Games? Jump over to 4 Hunger Games Themes for a Killer Analysis.)

Before You Write: Don’t Forget to Outline

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These are just a few of the many Hunger Games characters you can write about. No matter which one you choose, an outline will definitely help you stay focused when writing your essay.

It’s easy to get so caught up in the psychology of a character that you ramble on and forget your thesis. An outline makes sure you stay on point and that each item you address relates to your thesis.

Need some help with analyzing the character you selected? Try these posts:

And if you’re having trouble diving deep enough into the character or just need to make sure your writing is error-free, you can always turn to Kibin’s editors. They’ll not only make sure you don’t have any typos but also ensure your writing is focused and flows well.

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While meeting a whole bunch of new people is great, it can be a mental challenge to try to remember people’s names, what they do, or even if they’re the people hosting what has now turned into a pretty awesome party.

Reading a novel filled with tons of characters can feel just like walking into a party of strangers.

In both instances, it can be hard to keep names and stories straight.

It’s probably not a big deal if you see Andria at the party later and call her Arianna. But it probably is a big deal (at least to your professor) if you’re analyzing a novel, such as The Handmaid’s Tale, and you refer to the protagonist as Ofglen rather than Offred.

If you’re still trying get to know everyone in The Handmaid’s Tale, let me be your host, and I’ll introduce you to four key characters.

(Need to write about themes in the novel? Head over to 3 The Handmaid’s Tale Themes to Analyze in Your Essay.)

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How to Analyze 4 Important Handmaid’s Tale Characters

The Handmaid’s Tale is filled with a variety of characters, so I won’t be introducing you to everyone. Instead, let’s stick to four important characters in the novel: Offred, Serena Joy, Aunt Lydia, and the Commander.

Handmaid’s Tale Character #1: Offred

Offred is the narrator and protagonist of The Handmaid’s Tale. She tells the story of her life as a Handmaid: a woman who is forced to bear the children of infertile, elite couples.

While she sometimes reflects back on her life in the United States (before the rebellion and before it became Gilead), Offred is essentially complacent with her current existence.

Analyzing Offred

Offred’s complacency is an important aspect of her character. She’s a prime example of how people learn to accept their lives, no matter what they’re like. She’s willing to accept (at least on some level) that the new society of Gilead is actually of benefit to women.

Like many others, she’s also willing give up her freedoms and does little to fight for herself. As a result, she (and others) loses all freedom, allowing the government (who, by no coincidence is composed of men) to have complete control.

Because Offred has given up control of her freedom, her identify, and her body, it’s clear that she can’t be labeled a feminist. Men control every aspect of her existence, and she allows men (including Nick, with whom she ends up having an affair) to control her.

Essay idea:

Analyze one or more themes (such as feminism or complacency) in The Handmaid’s Tale.

Want to read an example essay that focuses on the theme of feminism in The Handmaid’s Tale? Check out Feminism in The Handmaid’s Tale, a Novel by Margaret Atwood.

Handmaid’s Tale Character #2: Serena Joy

When Gilead was still the United States, Serena Joy was an anti-feminist who advocated for traditional, conservative family values. In Gilead, she holds a high social ranking as she is the Commander’s wife.

Serena Joy, however, doesn’t live up to the name she has chosen for herself and is anything but serene or joyful.

She is angry because she too is completely controlled by men and is jealous of the Handmaids who are forced to have sex with her husband (and possibly bear the children she is unable to conceive).

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Analyzing Serena Joy

Serena Joy is the quintessential mean girl. She’s at the top of the social ladder, so she thinks she can bully others.

Therefore, even though she too is miserable in her own life because she is controlled by men, she takes out her anger and jealousy on the Handmaids, including Offred.


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Irony is a big part of Serena Joy’s life.

Pre-Gilead, she fought against feminism and for traditional values. Ironically enough, she got what she fought for once Gilead was established.

The values she fought for, though, leave her powerless and angry rather than fulfilled and joyful.

Essay idea:

Compare and contrast the social hierarchy of Gilead to that of other dystopian novels.

Want to read more about the social structure in Gilead? Read The Social Mechanics of The Handmaid’s Tale by Margaret Atwood

Handmaid’s Tale Character #3: Aunt Lydia

Aunt Lydia is part of a group of women called Aunts. Aunts work for the government and are assigned the task of essentially brainwashing women (like Offred and the other Handmaids) into accepting their new roles in society.

Aunt Lydia appears as a Handmaid’s Tale character mainly in flashbacks.

She is very much a part of Offred’s internal monologue as Offred often thinks back to what Aunt Lydia preached during the indoctrination. (Whether she believes all of Aunt Lydia’s words is debatable.)

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Analyzing Aunt Lydia

In a world where women are oppressed, Aunt Lydia is certainly not a gal’s best friend or confidant—and most certainly not a Handmaid’s BFF.

Aunt Lydia works hard to convince Handmaids that they’re destined for their duties. She uses Bible verses in an attempt to illustrate that Gilead and its rules are God’s will and that the Handmaids are performing essential roles in society.

She seems to enjoy her power over the Handmaids and has little sympathy for their place in Gilead. Yet she does sometimes sympathize with the wives of the Commanders, asking the Handmaids to see life from their point of view.

Essay idea:

Analyze the use of language (including language of the Bible) in The Handmaid’s Tale to illustrate how the government asserts power and control over its citizens.

Read the example essayanalyzes the author’s use of Biblical verses in the novel.

Handmaid’s Tale Character #4: The Commander

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The Commander is the head of the household in which Offred is the Handmaid. Though at times he feels trapped in society, he’s a powerful man who actually helped construct Gilead.

(I imagine at least one Handmaid saying things like, “You feel trapped? Ha! Try seeing life from my point of view!” or “Really? You’re not happy with society? You’ve got no one but yourself to blame!”)

Offred doesn’t see the Commander as all good or all bad. At times she even likes him because he actually shows some compassion toward her. They can sometimes even seem more like friends or lovers as they talk or play Scrabble together.

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Analyzing the Commander

There is no doubt that the Commander holds the power. He is the head of the household and even helped construct the social order of Gilead. (It’s no coincidence that his title is actually “Commander.”)

The Commander appears to feel compassion for Offred as he allows her to play Scrabble and read. He also suggests that he enjoys her company and enjoys their conversations.

On the surface, this all seems well and good, but it can be argued that his motives are personal.

He treats Offred like a mistress. He tells her that his wife doesn’t understand him and asks Offred to dress up so that he can show her off at Jezebel’s (which is no more than a glorified brothel).

And he does all of this for his own satisfaction and doesn’t care if there are any consequences for Offred if she is caught breaking the rules.

Essay idea:

Examine the Commander’s motives. Is he being compassionate by letting Offred break the rules with him? Or is he being selfish by not caring about her feelings or what might happen if she’s caught?

Read more about the Commander and his motives in the example essay The Key Role of the Commander in The Handmaid’s Tale, a Novel by Margaret Atwood.

Now That You Know Everyone…

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Now that you’ve been officially introduced to a few of the key Handmaid’s Tale characters, you’re ready to turn your analysis into an essay.

If you’re still looking for essay topic ideas, check out these additional example essays:

Ready to turn your ideas into an essay? Use these resources to put your paper in motion:

Don’t forget, your friends at Kibin are at the party too—and ready to help make sure your paper will make the grade.

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The Crucible Characters: What You Need to Know for Your Literary Analysis https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/the-crucible-characters-literary-analysis/ https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/the-crucible-characters-literary-analysis/#respond Tue, 24 Jul 2018 00:00:19 +0000 https://www.kibin.com/blog/?post_type=essay-writing-blog&p=6574 Read more "The Crucible Characters: What You Need to Know for Your Literary Analysis"]]> CLSC LIT TV (8:00 – 10:00 p.m.) – Survivor: Salem Edition (Reality. First aired 1953)

Abigail and friends are found dancing naked in the forest and are accused of witchcraft. They claim to be bewitched in an attempt to avoid a possible death sentence if convicted. In a vengeful move, Abigail accuses Elizabeth of practicing witchcraft. (Elizabeth fired Abigail for having an affair with her husband, John, and Abigail still holds a grudge and still wants to be with John.) Abigail denies the affair, both Elizabeth and John fight for their lives during trial, and John ultimately admits to adultery. But it does not end well for him (and many others in the community).

Sounds like a juicy new reality TV show, right?

Though The Crucible isn’t complete reality (and what reality show is?), the play is based on the Salem Witch Trials that took place in Salem, Massachusetts, in 1692–1693.

Like with any reality TV show, you need to know the basics about the characters before you can fully understand what’s going on.

Think of tuning in mid-season to Teen Mom, The Real Housewives of Miami, or Big Brother. You’ll have to do some catching up on plot lines to know who hooked up with who, who just got out of jail, and who just got in a fight.

While you’ll have to binge-watch on your own to catch up on actual reality TV, I’m here to help you catch up on the plot lines of five important The Crucible characters in Arthur Miller’s play.

I’ll even give you a few tips to help you write a literary analysis about the play.

5 The Crucible Characters You Need to Know for Your Literary Analysis

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Let me first start by saying that there are a lot of characters in this play, and I can’t possibly discuss all of The Crucible characters here. Instead, I’ll discuss five of the key players and their roles.

Character #1: John Proctor

John Proctor is like the reality show husband we love to hate. When we’re introduced to him, he seems like a nice enough guy. He’s hard working and seems to be respected by the community.

But he’s not all that.

Sure, he’s innocent of witchcraft, and sure, during trial he fights to save his wife, Elizabeth, from being sentenced to death. But his chivalrous deeds aren’t really chivalrous. He’s trying to save himself from being sentenced to death too.

And don’t let his show of love for his wife fool you into thinking he’s the perfect husband. After all, he did have an affair with Abigail, who, by the way, was only 17. (John was in his 30s.)

Spoiler alert: In the end, John ends up being convicted of witchcraft and is hanged for his crimes. (I guess there’s no chance of him returning for the reunion show.)

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Character #2: Elizabeth Proctor

Elizabeth’s Twitter handle would be @GoodyProctor, and there’s a reason for it. She’s good—to a fault. She’s prim, proper, and of course, moral. She’d take praying over partying any day.

As viewers, we want to see her do something bad. Something. Anything—just to prove she’s a little bit more human.

Though we never see her do anything too terrible, we do witness Elizabeth’s cold and unforgiving nature. She holds steadfast to her morals and doesn’t forgive John for the affair with Abigail. (Of course, who’d blame her for not forgiving him, right?)

As it turns out, even Goody Proctor has a bit of a vengeful side too. She spreads a few nasty rumors around town about Abigail.

During the trial, Elizabeth shows her love for John by lying to the courts about his affair. It all backfires, though, as she ends up implicating her husband, and he’s sentenced to death.

In the end, Elizabeth finally forgives herself for being a cold and unloving wife and forgives John for the affair. Her execution is postponed because she’s pregnant.

In the world of reality TV, producers would have already tried to convince Elizabeth to star in a Widowed & Pregnant spin-off.

Example literary analysis essay about Elizabeth Proctor

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Character #3: Abigail Williams

Modern-day Abigail would spend a fair amount of time taking duck-face selfies and trying to garner more followers on Instagram. She’s a self-absorbed 17 year old who knows how to manipulate people when she needs to (and apparently, she needs to do so often).

Watching her is like driving by a car crash. You know there’s been destruction, and lots of it, but you don’t quite know how it happened. And worse yet, you can’t look away.

In the wake of Abigail’s destructive path are those who take the fall for her on the witchcraft accusations. Abigail pins the whole thing on Tituba (and a few others), but the irony of it all is that Abigail is the one who convinced the others to go out that night.

The Proctors’ marriage falls victim to Abigail’s manipulation too. She has an affair with the much older John Proctor. His wife, Elizabeth, isn’t too keen on forgiving either one of them.

After the affair ends, Abigail still wants nothing more than to be with John and wants Elizabeth out of the way. Abigail accuses people, including Elizabeth, of witchcraft, and Elizabeth is ultimately arrested.

In the end, Abigail realizes she can’t stay in the community, and she skips town, taking all of her uncle’s (Reverend Parris) money with her.

I’m guessing Abigail’s bad behavior is just bad enough for her to earn her own reality show.

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Character #4: Reverend Samuel Parris

Though Reverend Parris is a reverend, he serves himself more than he serves the Lord.

He’s happy to have the spotlight on him, so starring in a reality show would be right up his alley. While he preaches hellfire and brimstone to his parishioners, his sermons often fall on deaf ears.

He pretty much knows how people feel about him. Yet because he’s so self-absorbed and concerned about creating his own place in the town, he makes things worse by continually believing that everyone’s out to get him.

And for a reverend, he’s not too honest, either. He lies about seeing the women dancing naked to save himself and his reputation. (After all, what would it look like if his own niece, Abigail, was convicted of witchcraft?)

Another not-so-redeeming quality about Parris is his sheer greed. He does anything he can for more money and never thinks he’s paid what he’s worth. (He probably wouldn’t return for a second season unless he could negotiate a much higher salary.)

Example literary analysis essays about Reverend Parris

Bonus: Example historical essay about Reverend Samuel Parris

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    Character #5: Reverend John Hale

    Reverend Hale is the resident expert. He’s intellectual. He’s a trained witch-hunter. And he thinks he’s all that.

    He’s kind of like the mid-season replacement reality star who joins the show and claims he knows how to play the game better than everyone else. In the end, however, he’s no better than the rest of the cast.

    Hale begins by wanting to do good and to expose those who are practicing witchcraft. The trial, however, leaves him broken. Compared to the beginning of the story, Hale no longer has the same beliefs in witchcraft, in the legal system, or perhaps, even in God.

    In the end, he too believes that lying is the best route—if only to save one’s life.

    Because Hale is so disillusioned, he has my vote for the cast member who would refuse to return for the next season.

    Example literary analysis essays about Reverend John Hale

    Writing Your Literary Analysis Essay

    When it comes to writing about literature, there are all sorts angles to write about. Here are a few general ideas to consider when writing about The Crucible.

    (Of course, make sure to check the assignment guidelines before you choose a topic):

    • Character analysis: Writing a character analysis means that you’ll focus your entire paper on one or two important aspects of a character, such as the manipulative nature of Abigail. To learn more about writing a character analysis, read How to Write a Character Analysis That Works.
    • Analyze the genre: The Crucible is an allegory for McCarthyism in the United States. Look for examples of how the witch hunts and witch trials parallel the hunt for communists.
    • Analyze theme: A theme is the underlying meaning of a work. It’s not necessarily what the piece is about. For example, The Crucible is about witch trials, but the themes of the play include good vs. evil, deceit, and the paranoia surrounding the witch trials.

    The Crucible is about witch trials, but embedded themes include good vs. evil, deceit, and paranoia.
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    You might also want to write your analysis focusing on another literary technique. Not sure which literary term to work with? Read 15 Literary Terms You Need to Know to Write Better Essays.

    Of course, your analysis might take a different path. You might want to write a compare and contrast essay to compare The Crucible to another literary work, such as The Scarlet Letter. Or you might even compare The Crucible characters to characters in other works.

    You could also compare The Crucible to its film adaptation. Of course, don’t forget that The Crucible is based on the real Salem Witch Trials, so you might compare the play to the actual historical events.

    Stuck in Reruns?

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    If you feel like you’ve written the same type of essay a few times and can’t seem to figure out how to improve your literary analysis skills, here are two posts to provide some additional guidance:

    Once you’ve written the best essay you think you can possibly write, set it aside for a day or two and binge on your favorite show (or maybe do something else to take your mind off essay writing).

    Stepping away from your paper for a while will allow you to see what works and, perhaps, what doesn’t work so well in your essay on The Crucible characters. It will also help you see where you need to revise your paper.

    If you still need some help behind the scenes after you’ve drafted your essay, our editors can help you get your paper ready for prime time.

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    It seems almost impossible, doesn’t it? Why? Because you need a visual to guide you. You need to see each step and see a finished product before you can create your own.

    Writing can be like that too.

    Sometimes, even after reading guidelines and tips on how to write a specific assignment, you still don’t quite understand how to put it all together.

    If you’re feeling that way about writing a character analysis, here are two character analysis essay examples to inspire your finest work.

    (Psst… Didn’t read all those tips about how to actually write a character analysis? Read How to Write a Character Analysis That Works before you read the rest of this post.)

    2 Character Analysis Essay Examples with Character

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    The character analysis essay examples below analyze characters from short stories. I’ve included a variety of comments to help you see what these writers do well and what they might do to improve their analyses.

    Character analysis essay example #1: Character Analysis of Anders in Bullet in the Brain, a Book by Tobias Wolff

    The first essay is a brief analysis. It focuses on how readers see the character of Anders in the short story “Bullet in the Brain” develops.

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    In the above character analysis essay example, I noted that the writer could strengthen the introduction, thesis statement, and conclusion. Need help in those areas? Check out these resources:

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    Character analysis essay example #2: Character Analysis of Arnold Friend in Joyce Carol Oates’ “Where Are You Going? Where Have You Been?”

    The second analysis focuses on Arnold Friend from the short story “Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been?” This example is a longer, more fully developed essay.

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    It does more than just focus on what readers learn about the character from reading the short story. It also develops a more in-depth analysis of the type of personality presented in the character of Arnold Friend.

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    A Few Final Thoughts

    Writing a character analysis isn’t only about examining what a character looks like or what he or she does. Writing an effective analysis means looking at the character more deeply to see what makes the character tick.

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    For instance, is a character cynical because of his background and life’s work, like Anders in “Bullet in the Brain”?

    Is a character more than just a creepy guy? Could he be considered a deranged psychopath like Arnold Friend in “Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been?”

    No matter the character you choose to analyze, remember to develop a key focus for your analysis and use evidence from the text to help support your conclusions.


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    If you’re looking for more information about literary analysis, take a look at these posts:

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    This Is How to Tackle Your Brave New World Essay https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/tackle-brave-new-world-essay/ https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/tackle-brave-new-world-essay/#respond Tue, 11 Apr 2017 00:00:00 +0000 https://www.kibin.com/blog/?p=4259 Read more "This Is How to Tackle Your Brave New World Essay"]]> Aldous Huxley’s Brave New World is one of those books that has the power to really captivate readers. Even if you don’t like the promiscuity or John’s undoing, you have to admit that there’s something really enthralling about the whole thing.

    Unfortunately, being enthralled in a story doesn’t make you prepared to write an essay about it. But that’s what I’m here for: to help with your Brave New World essay.

    With my help, you’ll have gotten sucked into an exciting book and will be able to share your thoughts about it in a clear, concise, and interesting way.

    First, Here Are a Few Pointers

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    When you’re writing your Brave New World essay, or any literary essay, it’s important to remember the goal of your writing. You want to analyze, not summarize. This means going beyond stating what happened in the story and explaining its significance.

    This also means that you don’t have to focus on the broad view of the story. Rather, you can focus on a character, literary device, theme, or anything else you think is important.

    One way to ensure you stick to an analysis instead of a summary is to write a strong thesis statement. While it’s true that the thesis statement tells the reader what your Brave New World essay is about, it also reminds you what your essay is about.

    As long as you relate your arguments to a strong thesis statement, you won’t have to worry about straying away from an analysis.

    (Don’t worry, I’ll show you some thesis statement examples in the different sections below.)

    Go Big Picture: Talk About Themes

    One of the biggest themes in Brave New World is the cost of happiness at the expense of truth. The whole society operates on what the reader sees as a very strange—and very wrong—premise because they are covering up truth for the sake of happiness.

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    Brave New World makes readers question what constitutes happiness, and this might be an interesting angle to explore in your essay.

    Here are some questions you can tackle in your Brave New World essay:

    • Is happiness the elimination of worries and doubts (even if that’s conditioned and soma-fueled), or is it the exploration and fulfillment of your individual identity?
    • Can you truly be happy without free will, or is it an illusion of happiness?

    Here’s what a sample thesis statement about the theme of happiness at the expense of truth looks like:

    Brave New World focuses on the theme of happiness at the price of truth. This theme is prevalent throughout the novel and presents itself through the widespread use of soma and the exploration of the Savage Reservation.

    Here are a few other themes you could discuss:

    • Promiscuity in the absence of family or personal attachments
    • The limits and risks of total governmental control of the population
    • The use of technology as a means of oppression

    Essays About Characters

    There are so many interesting characters in Brave New World that it might be hard to pick just one.

    But if you’re going to concentrate on characters in your Brave New World essay, focusing on one character and his or her development will make for a much clearer essay.

    Of course, no character exists in a vacuum. You can mention other characters and how they affected the one you’re writing about, but they shouldn’t be your main focus.

    My particular favorite character is Helmholtz. While he didn’t get a starring role, he was critical to the overall story. He felt held back in his caste, unable to realize his full potential because of the culture he was raised in.

    However, it’s this culture that prevents him from relating fully to John. Despite their mutual love of all things literary, Helmholtz’s culturally instilled values curb his understanding of love and relationships (the very things many of the stories and poems he enjoys are about).


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    Writing about a character you connect with, love, or love to hate will make your essay more fun to write and more enthralling for your reader as well.

    My Helmholtz-inspired thesis statement would read something like this:

    Helmholtz Watson is an important character in Brave New World because he helps other characters realize truths about themselves, lives as a symbol of the limitations a caste system places on people, and represents the clash of ideas between the old world and the new.

    What Was Up with William Shakespeare, Anyway?

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    Speaking of Helmholtz’s love of literature and poetry, there’s an awful lot in Brave New World that has to do with Shakespeare. There’s so much there, in fact, that it’s not difficult to write your entire essay about this motif.

    The works of William Shakespeare in Brave New World appeal to two characters: John and Helmholtz.

    For John, Shakespeare was one of his main foundations for learning to read and thus an important element in how he interprets language and the world around him. It’s how he expresses himself, especially when experiencing extreme emotions like anger.

    For Helmholtz, Shakespeare represents something different: a contrast to the society he resents so much. The plays touch on emotions such as love, jealousy, anger, and elation—extreme emotions that are frowned upon by the people in the World State.

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    Shakespeare allows Helmholtz to explore these emotions from a distance without risking being ostracized by showing them.

    Finally, Shakespeare’s works provide a link between worlds by serving as a common interest for John and Helmholtz. Because of the plays, John has the language and Helmholtz can tap into his emotions—both are needed for effective communication and understanding between two people or two groups of people.

    My thesis statement about the Shakespeare motif in Brave New World would look like this:

    The works of William Shakespeare in Brave New World play a critical role in the novel, serving as a form of communication, self-understanding, and a connection between the World State and the Savage nation.

    Find Ways to Make Your Brave New World Essay Interesting

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    No matter what you write, you should always keep your reader in mind. This goes for your Brave New World essay too. Most likely, your instructor has many essays on roughly the same topics to read. So make sure yours is memorable—and memorable for the right reasons.

    Here are a couple of ways to accomplish this:

    1. Pick an interesting topic. Choosing a character that’s not John or Bernard can go a long way in making your essay stand out. The same goes for non-typical themes and motifs. The important thing is that you have enough evidence to back up your argument. You don’t want a topic so obscure that there are only a few references in the whole book. So choose something with more substance.
    2. Write in an unorthodox format. Whether or not you choose an unconventional topic, you can have a lot of fun playing with formatting. Clear this with your instructor first. If it doesn’t have to be in basic essay style, feel free to get creative. Write your essay as a letter from a citizen of the World State. Or you can write an interview transcript between you and one of the characters.

    Don’t let the fact that you have to write a Brave New World essay keep you from having fun with it.


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    Conclusion

    Hopefully now you have some different angles from which to look at your essay. This is by no means a complete list, and I encourage you to use this post as a jumping-off point into a topic all your own.

    Brave New World is full of information and meaning. The purpose of your essay is to explain part of this meaning to your reader (explaining everything may take a dissertation… or several dissertations).

    In the process, you may also be able to clear up your thoughts on the work and understand it better.

    Want to see how other students have tackled their Brave New World essays? Check out these great examples:

    If you’re not sure about your approach to your Brave New World essay, send it to one of the Kibin editors for review. They can help you ensure it’s interesting and accurate.

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    How to Write a Character Analysis That Works https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/character-analysis-that-works/ https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/character-analysis-that-works/#comments Tue, 06 Sep 2016 00:00:00 +0000 https://www.kibin.com/blog/?p=4157 Read more "How to Write a Character Analysis That Works"]]> Ever watch an episode of CSI (or maybe binge-watched an entire season … or two)?

    If you have (or have watched just about any other TV crime drama), then you’ve seen a group of detectives investigating a crime.

    You’ve seen them trying to figure out if they’ve identified the correct perpetrator. They look at the suspect’s age, gender, race, background, employment, and social interactions.

    This type of analysis is a lot like a character analysis for an essay. Detectives need to know details about their suspects in order to complete effective investigations. Similarly, you need to know the details about a character in order to complete an effective analysis.

    So let’s get to our investigation, and learn how to identify our suspect … or in literary terms, write a character analysis that works.

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    How to Write a Character Analysis That Works

    A character analysis can take two forms:

    1. A character analysis as part of a literary analysis paper.
    2. An entire essay that focuses on the analysis of a single character.

    Analyzing a character as part of a literature analysis means, of course, that you won’t be able to include as many details about the character. Writing an analysis as an entire paper, however, means you need a lot more evidence to fully analyze the character.

    Whether you’re writing a character analysis as part of a literary analysis or a full character analysis essay, follow these tips to write a smart analysis.

    Start with the Basics

    Once you’ve identified a character, sketch out basic observations about that character.

    Here are a few suggestions to get you started:

    • Name/nickname
    • Age
    • Marital status
    • Physical description: How would you describe the character’s clothing, hair, or tattoos? Does the character wear glasses? Is the character neat, slovenly, thin, or overweight?
    • Language/speech patterns: What type of word choices does the character use? What type of tone does the character use?

    As you list these attributes, consider them carefully. Take notes as to how these seemingly small traits may influence the character.

    The point is to analyze. Don’t take anything at face value.

    Here’s what I mean:

    • A character’s name or nickname may have another meaning. Think Don Quixote. It’s no coincidence that the word quixotic means exceedingly idealistic or unrealistic and sounds a lot like Quixote.
    • A character’s age will influence how he or she acts, speaks, dresses, and interacts with others.
    • A character’s weight, hairstyle, and clothing choices can say a lot about a character’s personality. Think Clark Kent, Superman’s secret identity. He wears glasses and dresses conservatively to match his quiet demeanor.
    • A character’s word choices might reveal his/her level of education, his/her thoughts about others, or his/her sense of humor.

    With the basics in place, move on to a more complex analysis.

    Who Is This Character?

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    If you’re a CSI detective, a good way to get to know your suspect is to conduct interviews. If you’re writing a character analysis, you’ll need to ask some good interview questions.

    Here’s some questions to get you started:

    • What is the character’s background? How do things like the character’s childhood, previous relationships, education, and work history affect the character’s life today?
    • How would other characters describe this character? Think of personality characteristics, such as shy, angry, mean, sympathetic, arrogant, funny, generous, manipulative, etc.
    • How does this character feel about himself/herself, or how might this character describe himself/herself? Again, think personality traits. Keep in mind that the character’s views of himself/herself might vary greatly from the opinions of others.
    • How does this character interact with others? Is the character the life of the party? Is he or she a loner? Does the character have any notable friends or enemies?
    • How does the character react to situations? Does a minor irritation, such as waiting too long in traffic, throw your character into a rage? Does your character remain calm and stoic, even in the face of great tragedy?

    Try one of these worksheets to help keep your notes organized:

    Write Your Report (or Essay)

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    After interviews, detectives need to write their reports to document the evidence. (This is the longer, more tedious part of the process they don’t show on TV.)

    You’ll need to write your report too. The difference? Your writing will need to be in essay format.

    Here’s a few example character analysis essays to inspire you:

    So how do you take all of the information about a character and turn it into a killer essay?

    Follow these three steps.

    Step #1: Find a focus

    You’ve taken lots of notes about your character and know a heck of a lot about him or her, but so what? What’s the point you want to make about this character? For that matter, what’s the point of your paper?

    The key to writing a character analysis that works is identifying a focus and analyzing a specific aspect of a character.


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    Let’s say you’re analyzing Batman.

    As you examine his character, you realize that citizens of Gotham, Robin, Commissioner Gordon, and even the butler, Alfred, all say the same thing—Batman’s mission is not only fighting crime, but also making sure that justice is served.

    It’s this sense of justice that fuels Batman. It’s his background, the fact that his parents were murdered when he was a child, that has led him to a life of crime-fighting and an overpowering sense of revenge and justice.

    This type of analysis creates a specific focus for your paper. You’re not just writing a random list of things that describe Batman. You’re using a central focus to not only explain who the character is, but also analyze him and his motivations.

    Once you’ve figured out the general focus, move on to develop a thesis statement to identify the path for your paper.

    Step #2: Body of evidence

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    Like any paper, in a character analysis, you need to be able to support what you write. This means you’ll need to find evidence from the piece of literature you’re analyzing.

    The body of your character analysis paper will incorporate the information you’ve gathered from the notes you’ve taken about your character.

    Use these notes to help describe the character, explain who the character is, and what role the character plays in the literature.

    Of course, you’ll also provide plenty of examples to help support your thesis statement.

    If you’re writing about Batman, you’ll include the information from your notes but also evidence to support your thesis about Batman’s sense of justice.

    These examples might include specific instances of Batman seeking revenge or justice on any one of the villains in the Batman series. The Joker, Riddler, or Penguin quickly come to mind.

    Step #3: The conclusion

    In the land of CSI, we’ve just come back from the final commercial break. We’re about to wrap things up by issuing the arrest warrant.

    It’s time to wrap things up with your character analysis too. Now you’re ready to write a conclusion that sums up the main ideas of your paper. You might want to end with a quote or statistic, or leave readers with an important question.

    Want to learn more about conclusions? Read How to Write a Killer Essay Conclusion.

    The Final Sentence

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    A successful investigation ends with a criminal behind bars and sentenced accordingly.

    A successful character analysis, though, doesn’t end with the final sentence of your paper. There’s always more work to be done.

    Set your paper aside for a day or two. Then return to it to revise. Don’t forget to check for the basics, such as formatting and correct APA or MLA citations, depending on what your assignment calls for.

    After your revisions are complete, send your essay to our investigative team of editors for a little revision expertise!

     

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