Here’s a quick math equation to help explain why titles do matter.

English profs often teach 4 classes each semester, with 25 students in each class.

(4 classes x 25 students = 100 students per semester)

Students on average write 4 papers each semester.

(4 papers x 100 students = 400 papers per semester)

Each academic year consists of 2 semesters.

(2 semesters x 400 papers = 800 papers per year)

If your English prof has been teaching for 25 years, he’s read about 20,000 student essays.

That’s a lot of essays.

Even if you’re not writing an essay for an English class, your other professors have read tons of essays too. Thus, you need to do something to make your paper to stand out among the masses.

A title is the perfect place to start because it’s the first thing your teacher will read.

Think about it. If you were teaching a class, would you rather read a paper titled “10 Facts About Puppies That Will Make Your Hair Stand on End” or one titled “Essay 3: Facts About Puppies”?

Yeah, me too.

So if you’re stumped, I’ll show you how to title an essay your readers won’t be able to resist.

What Makes an Essay Title Good Enough to Impress Your Professor?

A good essay title, one worthy of impressing your prof, must do the following:

Reflect the focus of your essay

Titles like “Hockey Rules” or “Shakespeare’s Comedies” give readers a general sense of a broad topic, but they don’t explain the focus.

Instead, try something like “How the Offsides Rule Destroyed Hockey” or “Shakespeare’s Comedies: A Reflection of Modern Rom-Coms.”

Correspond with the purpose and tone of your essay

A serious research essay or scientific report generally demands a serious title. For instance, the title “The BCA Corporation: The Underlying Cause of Water Pollution in the East River” would, in most cases, be more appropriate than “Why BCA’s Environmental Policies Suck.”

Use appropriate wording for the intended audience

If you’re a scientist writing for other scientists, the title of your paper might be Sonic Analog of Gravitational Black Holes in Bose-Einstein Condensates. The average reader might not have a clue what this means, but other scientists do. In this case, then, the title is appropriate.

If you’re writing an essay for an assignment, chances are you’re writing not only for your prof but also for a general audience. Thus, long, wordy titles aren’t usually appropriate because they’re likely to be both boring and difficult to read.

In other words, you want your title to be somewhat brief, and you want it to be catchy. If your audience sees a boring title, they’re more likely to think your paper is boring too.

If your audience sees a boring title, they’re more likely to think your paper is boring too.
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Now that you have a better understanding of what it takes to write an impressive essay title, here are four tips to help you write your own title.

4 Tips on How to Title an Essay

When you think of awesome titles, you might think of Ernest Hemingway plunking away on a manual typewriter creating For Whom the Bell Tolls or Orson Welles writing Citizen Kane. But you don’t have to be a famous author, nor do you have to use a manual typewriter, to write a great title.

Use these tips to help you write the perfect title for your paper.

Take a line from your essay

Read through your draft, and look for a line that stands out, one that seems to capture the essence of your paper.

Your introduction, thesis statement, and conclusion are good places to start.

Take, for example, the title Macbeth: A Nihilistic, Self-loathing Tragic Hero. A line from the opening paragraph gives this essay a catchy title. It not only informs readers of the focus of the essay but also makes readers want to learn about the title character. (It also sounds a whole lot better than something like “William Shakespeare’s Macbeth,” doesn’t it?)

Surprise or shock your readers

Using an unexpected word choice or shocking statement that might slightly offend readers or even pique their interest can create a compelling title.

For instance, Stop Dressing Your Six-Year-Old Like a Skank: And Other Words of Delicate Southern Wisdom by Celia Rivenbark draws readers in with the word “skank.” It’s certainly not a word people use to describe six-year-old girls, so the mere presence of the word in the title sparks controversy.

The essay Boys Are Heroes, Girls Need to Be Rescued, and Other Lies Toy-Makers Tell Us also makes use of unexpected word choices. It uses the word “lie” in conjunction with classic stereotypes of boys and girls to make readers want to learn more about the evils of toy companies.

Rework a common saying

There are, of course, times when clichés and sayings aren’t appropriate in writing. But if you rework an existing saying to creating something original, it can be an effective attention grabber.

Let’s say you’ve written a satirical paper about why people shouldn’t keep trying to accomplish goals and should just give up. You might change the saying “if at first you don’t succeed, try, try again” to “if at first you don’t succeed, give up.”

Readers will wonder whether this is a serious essay about failure or a satirical piece. Either way, you’ve got their attention.

Here’s another example. The phrase “honesty is the best policy” might be changed to “Honesty Is Never the Best Policy” or When Lying Is the Best Policy.

Most people, of course, believe honesty is best. so they’re likely going to be interested in learning why they should lie.

Ask a question

This technique works particularly well for persuasive essays and argumentative essays as your goal for these papers is to convince the audience. By asking a question in your title, you’re already forcing readers to think about the subject.

For example, the essays Why Is Society Making Jokes About Mental Illness? and Is Fan Fiction Illegal Because It Is a Form of Plagiarism? use their titles to pose a question. The questions not only allude to the focus of the papers but also force the audience to consider their own personal answers to the questions.

Remember, the type of question you ask should reflect the tone of your paper. So if you’re writing a narrative essay, for instance, about a bad vacation experience with your roommate, you can use first-person point of view or second-person point of view to add a lighter tone to your paper.

For instance, the title “Didn’t You Promise Me This Would Be Fun?” uses both first- and second-person point of view to let readers know that the focus of the paper will be an experience that was supposed to be fun but ended up going wrong somewhere along the line.

2 More Resources to Help Title Your Essay

If you’ve tried the four tips above but nothing seems appropriate for your essay, check out How to Write Good Essay Titles That Are…Good for additional titling advice.

Just in case you’re writing a more light-hearted essay and can play around with more informal language, try this title generator. You can create such awesome titles as “How Bananas Once Saved the World” and “Why Socks Are Killing You.”

Still stumped and can’t think of anything that might impress your prof? Let a Kibin editor lend a helping hand. We can help with titles and just about any other step of the writing process.

“Come here, Pet.”

“Hey, Maternal Grandmother, could I get your recipe for Casserole?”

“Book about a Long Journey is pretty much the best thing I’ve ever read.”

“I love shopping at Clothing Store at Mall—its Regular Jeans are to die for.”

Meh. Yawn. Zzzzzz.

Now you understand the crushing ennui your teacher feels flipping through a stack of essays entitled “Narrative Essay” or “Essay 4,” “Analysis of Emily Dickinson’s Poetry,” or worst of all, the dreaded “Untitled.”

Boring, right? No wonder it takes three weeks to get them graded and handed back!

So how do you make your essay the shining gem in the rough, the beacon that keeps your teacher from falling asleep in yet another puddle of coffee and tears during hours-long grading marathons?

We’ll get there. First, let’s discuss why essay titles matter in the first place.

Why Are Essay Titles Important?

The title of an essay occupies a pretty sweet spot: front and center, first page. This is a position of prestige and privilege. It just begs to be read.

Don’t waste this opportunity to make a good first impression!

Much like a hook sentence, a title should snag the attention of your readers and make them want to read more.

Like a hook sentence, a title should snag your readers’ attention and make them want to read more.
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Most importantly, the title—even a short one—can give readers a lot of context about an essay. Good essay titles not only identify the essay’s subject, but they can also give readers clues about important elements of the essay:

• tone (Is it serious or irreverent?)
• structure (Is it argumentative? Are you comparing and contrasting?)
• angle/stance (Are you in favor of something or against it?)

So what goes into a mind-blowingly good essay title? Keep reading to find out!

What Are the Essential Elements of Good Essay Titles?

Unfortunately, there’s no one-size-fits-all approach to titling essays. While a one-word title might work for some essays, others practically beg for long, descriptive ones.

That said, there are a few qualities that most good essay titles share:.

1. A good essay title identifies the subject.

It probably seems obvious that a title should give the reader at least a hint about the essay’s subject, but you’d be surprised how often it doesn’t! I’ve edited plenty of essays with titles like “Analysis Essay,” “History,” or “Assignment 5.”

Not only are these boring, but they’re completely vague and nonspecific.

2. A great title establishes the tone of the essay.

In addition to telling readers what an essay is about, really great titles also help to set the tone or mood of the essay. A forceful, direct title is perfect for an angry rant or a somber piece of persuasion.

Titles with puns or other fun wordplay, on the other hand, suggest that the reader can take the piece a little less seriously.

3. Good essay titles are specific.

It’s possible for a title to establish both the tone and subject … but in a vague way. For instance, “A Scholarly Examination of Chinese Art” identifies a subject and a tone, but if the essay actually focuses on fifteenth-century Chinese pottery, specificity is lacking.

A more specific essay title would be “A Scholarly Examination of Fifteenth-Century Chinese Pottery.”

4. A great essay title is attractive to the intended audience.

Last but not least, a title should be attractive and interesting—but most importantly, it should be attractive and interesting to the audience for whom it was written.

For example, a playful and punny title might fall flat for a stodgy, humorless professor—you know the type.

In this case, it’s better to be straightforward and descriptive—but that doesn’t have to mean boring.

On the other hand, your creative writing instructor would probably appreciate a bit of clever wordplay.

This aspect of title-writing requires you to know your audience and make a judgment call regarding the type of title your readers will find engaging. But it’s totally worth it when you snag a big, fat ‘A,’ right?

Now that you know what goes into a good title, let’s look at some strategies for writing titles that meet these criteria.

Tips and Tricks for Writing Good Essay Titles

Now that you know the different components of a solid title, how do you actually write one?

Here are a few tips and tricks to help. For each of the following tips, I’ve also shared one or more relevant examples from the Kibin essay database.

Use subtitles to your advantage

Many essay titles have both a main title as well as a secondary title that elaborates a bit on the first part.

Consider the late David Foster Wallace’s essay Shipping Out: On the (nearly lethal) comforts of a luxury cruise. Alone, neither part of that title would meet all the criteria I listed earlier. Yet together, they create a title that’s almost irresistible. (What was “nearly lethal”? I have to know!)

Essay database example: Wrap It Up: An Ode to the Burrito

Sum it up

Another strategy for writing good essay titles is to choose two or three words that sum up the main ideas of the essay—bonus points if these words seem oddly juxtaposed as this creates interest and attraction. Just be sure that they’re relevant.

While they aren’t essays, Jared Diamond’s book Guns, Germs, and Steel and Chuck Klosterman’s essay collection Sex, Drugs, and Cocoa Puffs are both fantastic examples of this titling strategy in action. How could you pass those up?

Essay database example: Scalpel, Forceps, Empathy: How My College Experiences Are Preparing Me to Become a Competent Doctor

Take a page (well, a phrase) from someone else’s book

Sometimes, great titles are right under your nose—maybe even in the text you’re analyzing. An especially provocative or descriptive line can really set the tone for your essay and save you a bit of brainstorming.

And sometimes, you may find inspiration from a piece of writing that you aren’t writing about. Consider Joan Didion’s famous essay collection and the essay of the same name, Slouching Towards Bethlehem. The title of this work was inspired by the last line of William Butler Yeats’ poem The Second Coming.

One thing to remember, though: if your snippet is a direct quotation, be sure to place it in quotation marks, as in the example below.

Essay database example: “Dark of the Invisible Moon”: Imagery in Cormac McCarthy’s The Road

Get punny (if appropriate)

Clever wordplay has its place, including in essay titles. That said, there’s a fine line between funny and corny. Not all topics or essays are suited for a funny title. Use your best judgment, and keep your audience in mind.

Consider Donovan Hohn’s Moby-Duck: The True Story of 28,800 Bath Toys Lost at Sea & of the Beachcombers, Oceanographers, Environmentalists & Fools, Including the Author, Who Went in Search of Them. The title is cheeky yet descriptive and suits the subject well.

You can also balance your wit with a more buttoned-up subtitle to ensure that your work is still taken seriously. For instance, consider David Walter Toews’ book titled The Origin of Feces: What Excrement Tells Us about Evolution, Ecology, and a Sustainable Society.

Essay database example: Secrets of the C.I.A.: America’s Premier Chef’s School

Be provocative

Sometimes, the best essay title is simply a provocative statement that makes the reader feel just a tiny bit defensive or that speaks to an opinion the reader also holds. This titling strategy works especially well for argumentative and persuasive essays, in which you simply state your argument in the title. Pamela Druckerman’s Why French Parents Are Superior is a good example of such a title.

However, other types of non-argumentative yet controversial statements can also work. Consider Bertrand Russell’s Why I Am Not a Christian, a title that would have been particularly controversial in 1927, when it was originally published, or Mathew Ingram’s Is the Internet Making Us Smarter or Dumber? Yes.

Essay database example: Why Donald Trump Will Never Be President of the United States 

Bonus tip: Study great titles

If you really want to improve your title-writing game, figure out what makes you want to read an essay or article. Scroll through an online magazine that tickles your fancy—The New Yorker, the Opinion section of The Wall Street Journal, Rookie, and Rolling Stone all publish great essays—and figure out what makes you want to click on a title.

This I Believe is another great source of inspiration, especially for titling personal essays. Check out the titles of the most viewed essays, and consider which ones you want to read and why.

Parting Thoughts

Ultimately, writing good essay titles takes time and practice. In fact, some bloggers spend half the time it takes to create a piece of writing working on the title.

While this is definitely overkill for a school assignment—after all, you’re not necessarily competing for attention among thousands of other writers—it gives you an idea of just how important the title is.

But most importantly, you have the strategies you need to give your essay the name it deserves. And if you’re not sure if your title fits your paper or really reels the reader in, ask a Kibin editor for an honest opinion—we’re always happy to help!

Happy writing!