Thank you alex….i finally got it now

Hi Kencho,

You may find the following page helpful! We have a number of essays about the use of cell phones in school: https://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/search?q=phones%20school

There, you’ll be able to review essays that support your main point and essays that disagree with you main point, which you can use to refute the counterpoint to your argument!

Can anyone please help me in writing a good argumentative essay on the topic “phones should be allowed in schools”

I would say that students learn less in a non participative education…

Can u also please give me a sample argumentative essay

Can u please suggest a good hook for why phones should be allowed in schools

Hi Kencho,

That is an interesting take on your topic! What are the main points that you would like to raise in favor of less student participation in the classroom?

Ohh…i am writing on the system of education where there is teachers just teach without the students participation

I can certainly give you some ideas and starting points for a hook 🙂 First, your hook will depend on what kind of change in the education system you’re writing about. If you’re arguing for a specific change to be implemented, you might start your essay with a description of what the education system would look like if your change takes place. A vivid description of what could happen if your changes are implemented can hook your reader. You could also start with some interesting facts about the education system that support your argument, which will draw the reader in to what you have to say. I’d also suggest taking a look at this Kibin blog about writing good hook sentences to help with inspiration as well: https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/good-hook-sentences/